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First chapter of my ValenWind fiction entitled "The Monster Within"
This is something I'm afraid I'll never put up if I don't do it now, and every time I re-read it I find more mistakes. If you see any inconsistancies, feel free to berate me for them okay?
I'm such a bad fangirl for these two. They just...-sigh-
I have all the feels, okay? ;D
This fic takes places shortly after the events of Final Fantasy VII, so Advent Children's story should occur right after this one ends.
I'm re-writing as fast as I can so I can get these chapters up. And like I said, if you have any nitpicks you spied in this first chapter, alert me to them all right? I'm here to get actual judgement on my writing.
Hope you enjoyed!
PS: "The Children Shall Lead" was a reference to an old Star Trek episode.
This is something I'm afraid I'll never put up if I don't do it now, and every time I re-read it I find more mistakes. If you see any inconsistancies, feel free to berate me for them okay?
I'm such a bad fangirl for these two. They just...-sigh-
I have all the feels, okay? ;D
This fic takes places shortly after the events of Final Fantasy VII, so Advent Children's story should occur right after this one ends.
I'm re-writing as fast as I can so I can get these chapters up. And like I said, if you have any nitpicks you spied in this first chapter, alert me to them all right? I'm here to get actual judgement on my writing.
Hope you enjoyed!
PS: "The Children Shall Lead" was a reference to an old Star Trek episode.
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Wonderful start to the story!